I think it is a very colourful and image rich flyer. Not sure what the sentence "When adolescents needs extra support.........are invaluable" hopes to convey to the reader. Are you suggesting that Operation Young Ones be seen as that? If it is then it needs another sentence to make it clear. Is this flyer directed towards the charities involved with orphanages or directed towards the children themselves?
I think it is a very colourful and image rich flyer. Not sure what the sentence "When adolescents needs extra support.........are invaluable" hopes to convey to the reader. Are you suggesting that Operation Young Ones be seen as that? If it is then it needs another sentence to make it clear. Is this flyer directed towards the charities involved with orphanages or directed towards the children themselves?
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